Saturday, October 11, 2008
Oct. 10th
Yesterday most people had this day off. I took my sister to super market to buy some cookies, snack and drink. It was full of people, and it was hard to move. Meanwhile, I observed the faces of customers, and I found everyone was happy even though they had to wait for a long time if they wanted to pay the bill, and it was hard to move. Holiday would make people happy as if these events on the newspaper were not good, or the economy was bad. Why does the holidays make people happy? That's because everyone all has much stress, or people are tired of busy day?? I think both.
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I think people are just happy because they don't have to go to work.
Here's something to work on: the word "almost" is an adverb, so it has to go after the verb in the sentence you made. In addition, if you say, "People almost are happy" it means people were close to being happy but wern't (so they were sad). Just like if I say, "I almost fell down" it means I didn't fall down.
Try to revise your sentence by changeing the word order.
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